Ruby

Ruby’s healing journey
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2021-10-25 21:38:09 (UTC)

Made this poem a couple days ago

This poem is called sunshine kinda wanna know how I can improve probably will post on a reddit critique know it needs comma and stuff but is the poem itself bad

A ghost visited me a few days he kissed me on the cheek
Said I wasn’t too weak
A ghost told me I would be okay
Like the sun shine I needed that day

A ghost didn’t tell me anything he is gone
And never said much of anything
It was all me almost
In every way


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