Withered Rose

...Ashes, ashes, they all fall DOWN...
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2005-03-16 23:28:25 (UTC)

(Love Poem...yet another version)

This is after taking out everything my teacher suggested I
take out and other revisions...too general and what not. So
for those of you with short attention span...this one's for
you. ;o

"Why I Love You" (revised--shortest version)

I love...
The way your gorgeous green eyes softly shimmer
The way your breathtaking smile melts my heart
The way you let me touch your hair
I run my fingers through those hazelnut dreads you bare
The way you always let me take your chair
The way you wrap your arm around me
when we're sitting quietly watching movies
And hold my other hand at the same time
Like I'm all yours and you're all mine
The way you place your hand gently on the small of my back
when I'm ahead of you walking through an entrance
The way you tuck a loose piece of hair behind my ear and how
your thumb brushes my cheek as you pull it away
The way you speak with your hands and
sometimes even your feet
The way you smile when I bite my lip
The way you try to block me from any hits
The way you don't always let me win
The way you lift your chin to say, "Come on, let's go"
The way you treat my friends as your very own
The way you respect when I feel the need to be alone
The way you call my name from across the room
The way you wet your lips after taking a drink
The way you rise as I leave my chair
The way you wait for me to finish doing my hair
The way you loosely comb your fingers through your own hair
Like you're checking if it's all still there
The way you keep your head up like a handsome prince
The way you always look directly into my eyes
When I'm speaking to you in all seriousness
The way your head nods once when you say "hey"
The way you offer to come along when walking my dog
The way you lock your fingers around mine
The way you wait till I walk up the driveway
and open the door
when bringing me home
Before you drive away as you wave
The way you smile when you have something special to hide
The way you introduce me to all of your friends
The way you kiss me on the hand
The way you scrunch your eyebrows
The way you wrap your arm around the back of your neck
and rub it when you're stressed
The way you dip me back when the dance is slow
The way you hug me tightly like you're wishing to not let go
The way you act like that's not it
There's always more to come.

© Withered Rose


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