MaGRo0023

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2003-05-10 06:45:15 (UTC)

love letter to devan

i wrote a letter to devan just before we stopped talking.
she never replied. i dont know why but i figured its a
good example of my writing so why not put it in here.

Devan,

It seems an eternity has past since I last saw
your face. I have seen starlit evenings and amber
sunsets, but nothing of your beauty. The touch of your
skin has forgotten me, and the caress of your lips has
only seen me in my dreams. Your eyes are the stars that
guide me, the ambition that drives my soul. My mind
continues to play a dream of you being mine. I fall
asleep with you by my side and wake you in my arms. When
may the love of your heart be in my possession? I long
for you the way the moon longs for the sun. As the moon
serves the bitter night, I also frown, floating in the sky
above a barren winter that your absence has banished me
to. Every minute youć± e gone is an eternity of pain. My
heart becomes embedded in my spine as I imagine my life
without the smell of your hair, the taste of your lips, or
the light of your eyes gazing at me. You begin the
completion of my life, yet in my solitude, the pieces of
my heart remain adjacent, unable to combine to the whole
it once was. How may I define my love to you? As this
question has been asked before, it is still without an
answer. I love you with the fire of a thousand suns. My
eyes are glazed with your reflection inside. The thought
of your absence in my life sends tears flooding to my
eyes, and the lucid dream of your love is always there,
taunting me to death. A desert of ice will remain my home
until I see you again. It is then that the warmth of your
love may revive my heart that is incontestably yours for
the taking. The tears shall be mine until our eyes meet
again.

With All the Love I Possess,

Joshua

id love feedback on this, especially from devan, so feel
free.




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