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Sasha's Two Cents....
2003-03-01 03:36:41 (UTC)

a poem about someone in my life who takes me for granted

i posted this poem on another website, and they said it was
crap. what do you think???
"her"

Failure surrounds me,
darkness is all I see,
it scares the daylight out of me,
why is this happening to me?

Everything spins around,
while I watch myself fall further down,
all I can do is frown,
then I see myself on the ground.

one day I decide to try harder,
and my happiness flows faster,
then my mind begins to wonder,
will she push me farther?

while I am lost in the daydream,
I am awakened by her, standing over me,
I swear she is out to kill my dreams,
that's just the way it seems.

one person ruins it all,
one person makes the calls,
one person is the cause of my fall,
one person makes me feel this small.

all of this is because of her
I feel like a cold dog with no fur,
she makes my stomach turn,
why is she always so stern?

she tells me that I am worthless,
but I see through all the mess.
I am more than worth it,
so I say FORGET IT!




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