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2002-10-19 20:43:26 (UTC)

Understand the Difference?

Like diamonds thrown across black velvet
the night sky calls to me. With the cool
air winding into my lungs, thoughts
of insignificance creep into my mind.


Now, read this:


Last night I was outside enjoying the cool weather. As I
walked out into the driveway, the sky was so full of
stars. It was so clear and crisp. It got me to thinking
how insignificant we really are. How there are million of
stars and such an expanse of space that it is illogical to
assume we are alone.

Okay, see the difference? Which is more interesting to
you? Sure, the poem sucks, but overlook that. It just
isn't as interesting or fulfilling as the paragraph.

~L


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