Jencaero

Happy Noodle Boy Rox!
2002-04-30 03:30:21 (UTC)

whiteshadowfox (10:18:08 PM):..


whiteshadowfox (10:18:08 PM): but you see the problem with
it is
Afipunkgodess (10:18:09 PM): *me
Afipunkgodess (10:18:13 PM): what is the problem?
Afipunkgodess (10:18:15 PM): i dont like the end
Afipunkgodess (10:18:24 PM): it makes it sound as if we
have no control
whiteshadowfox (10:18:55 PM): i mean it does fit the
title then it doesn't
whiteshadowfox (10:18:58 PM): or maybe i don't understand
it'
whiteshadowfox (10:19:05 PM): because the title means
Afipunkgodess (10:19:06 PM): katie doesnt either
whiteshadowfox (10:19:13 PM): rapid changing as in a dream
whiteshadowfox (10:19:19 PM): so therefore if she is
dreaming this
Afipunkgodess (10:19:28 PM): her dreams are gone
Afipunkgodess (10:19:35 PM): therefore what?
whiteshadowfox (10:19:35 PM): no
whiteshadowfox (10:19:46 PM): she lives for nothing
whiteshadowfox (10:19:54 PM): because i think shes talking
about her life
whiteshadowfox (10:19:57 PM): and if her life is one big
dream
whiteshadowfox (10:20:07 PM): and the scream is the end
whiteshadowfox (10:20:21 PM): then its saying shes
suicidal...or am i missing the whole point of it?
Afipunkgodess (10:20:45 PM): its just saying
Afipunkgodess (10:20:46 PM): i think
Afipunkgodess (10:20:49 PM): that everythings going fast
Afipunkgodess (10:20:50 PM): too fast
Afipunkgodess (10:20:57 PM): and she feels as if she has
no control over anythign
Afipunkgodess (10:21:00 PM): *anything
Afipunkgodess (10:21:02 PM): and all she can do
Afipunkgodess (10:21:04 PM): is scream
Afipunkgodess (10:21:05 PM): and hold on
Afipunkgodess (10:21:11 PM): and hope that someone will
come and save her
Afipunkgodess (10:21:18 PM): from the nightmare that her
life has become
Afipunkgodess (10:21:20 PM): i dunno?
whiteshadowfox (10:21:22 PM): God help the person that does
whiteshadowfox (10:21:26 PM): yeah that sounds right
Afipunkgodess (10:21:29 PM): lol
whiteshadowfox (10:21:32 PM): your good at analyzing poems
Afipunkgodess (10:21:32 PM): nikki
whiteshadowfox (10:21:33 PM): i suck at it
Afipunkgodess (10:21:37 PM): no im not
Afipunkgodess (10:21:38 PM): nikki
Afipunkgodess (10:21:41 PM): when people write
whiteshadowfox (10:21:44 PM): yeah you are
Afipunkgodess (10:21:48 PM): they dont write with purpose
Afipunkgodess (10:21:51 PM): they write
Afipunkgodess (10:21:55 PM): and purpose comes of it
Afipunkgodess (10:22:02 PM): when they write its all
almost shallow
Afipunkgodess (10:22:03 PM): all one level
Afipunkgodess (10:22:08 PM): but what people see in the
writing
Afipunkgodess (10:22:13 PM): is what makes the poem good
Afipunkgodess (10:22:15 PM): what it conveys
Afipunkgodess (10:22:17 PM): to people
Afipunkgodess (10:22:20 PM): and how they can relate
Afipunkgodess (10:22:33 PM): because if they relate
whiteshadowfox (10:22:33 PM): so should i just write down
what i feel in a poem so people will understand me??
Afipunkgodess (10:22:36 PM): it wlil affect them
Afipunkgodess (10:22:43 PM): yeah well that would be a poem
whiteshadowfox (10:22:45 PM): ah i se
Afipunkgodess (10:22:48 PM): you dont aim
Afipunkgodess (10:22:49 PM): for something
Afipunkgodess (10:22:53 PM): you just let it flow
Afipunkgodess (10:22:56 PM): and what happens happens
whiteshadowfox (10:23:02 PM): i aim for a point to get
across when I write usually
Afipunkgodess (10:23:11 PM): and thats good too
Afipunkgodess (10:23:18 PM): but, you dont plan you dont
play by the book
Afipunkgodess (10:23:22 PM): you let it flow
Afipunkgodess (10:23:27 PM): you dont make a graph on how
to convey it.
Afipunkgodess (10:23:35 PM): mathematicions and scientists
Afipunkgodess (10:23:38 PM): would not make good poets
Afipunkgodess (10:23:53 PM): because everything is
concrete, has rules to follow. everything fits
Afipunkgodess (10:23:56 PM): poetry...
Afipunkgodess (10:24:07 PM): i dont know
Afipunkgodess (10:24:10 PM): im rabbling now
Afipunkgodess (10:24:11 PM): sorry
Afipunkgodess (10:24:12 PM): lol
whiteshadowfox (10:24:20 PM): no your not
Afipunkgodess (10:24:24 PM): but if you write for
yourself, write what you believe
Afipunkgodess (10:24:35 PM): write what you want to write
just let the words come out
Afipunkgodess (10:24:42 PM): katie seems to plan hers
Afipunkgodess (10:24:43 PM): i dont know
Afipunkgodess (10:24:44 PM): so still
Afipunkgodess (10:24:46 PM): *stiff
Afipunkgodess (10:24:47 PM): ?
Afipunkgodess (10:24:53 PM): and when i try planning mine
Afipunkgodess (10:24:54 PM): they suck
Afipunkgodess (10:24:56 PM): they usualy suck
Afipunkgodess (10:25:02 PM): because i have no feeling
Afipunkgodess (10:25:07 PM): and with my feeling i have no
words.
Afipunkgodess (10:25:21 PM): my words encase nothing
Afipunkgodess (10:25:29 PM): for with my life i have had
no experience no meaning
Afipunkgodess (10:25:32 PM): ?
Afipunkgodess (10:26:24 PM): lol help me here
whiteshadowfox (10:26:28 PM): *laughs* jen, your so biased
to not liking katies but, you have experience
whiteshadowfox (10:26:34 PM): your artistic so you let
things flow
Afipunkgodess (10:26:42 PM): im not artistic.
whiteshadowfox (10:26:42 PM): you let your unconscience
self take control of you
Afipunkgodess (10:26:43 PM): biased?
whiteshadowfox (10:26:44 PM): katie doesn't
Afipunkgodess (10:26:49 PM): no i dont, not quite enough
whiteshadowfox (10:26:55 PM): she doesn't want to see her
unconscience self
Afipunkgodess (10:26:56 PM): when i let my unconsience
self take control
whiteshadowfox (10:26:58 PM): well you do some
Afipunkgodess (10:26:58 PM): its scary
Afipunkgodess (10:27:01 PM): and people dont understand
Afipunkgodess (10:27:08 PM): i have poems written
Afipunkgodess (10:27:10 PM): somewhere
Afipunkgodess (10:27:12 PM): that are scary
Afipunkgodess (10:27:13 PM): and dark
Afipunkgodess (10:27:16 PM): and morbit
Afipunkgodess (10:27:18 PM): *morbid
Afipunkgodess (10:27:21 PM): that i wrote without thought
Afipunkgodess (10:27:25 PM): in health.
Afipunkgodess (10:27:37 PM): and if i were to look at them
again
Afipunkgodess (10:27:42 PM): and other people were to look
at them
Afipunkgodess (10:27:46 PM): they wouldnt understand.
whiteshadowfox (10:27:50 PM): thats just it
whiteshadowfox (10:28:10 PM): you and katie write when you
need to get all your angry
whiteshadowfox (10:28:27 PM): and misinterperted and
unsure and thoughts yuor just tired of thinking out
whiteshadowfox (10:29:07 PM): sorry
whiteshadowfox (10:29:08 PM): i g2g
whiteshadowfox (10:29:13 PM): don't know if i'll be on
tomorrow
whiteshadowfox (10:29:19 PM): don't want mom to wake up
and be to pissed at me
whiteshadowfox (10:29:30 PM): so email me with the rest of
your thoughs
whiteshadowfox (10:29:34 PM): sorry :-(
whiteshadowfox (10:29:38 PM): bye bye *waves*
Afipunkgodess (10:29:56 PM): byebye
Afipunkgodess (10:29:57 PM): miss you
Afipunkgodess (10:30:02 PM): lylas bye
whiteshadowfox (10:30:05 PM): miss you to


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